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All Comments on 'Little Sister's Big Butt Ch. 06'

by ZenZerker

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bad97bad97over 1 year ago

Please, please get an editor. Your stories are great, but they are unreadable due to extensive over descriptions. Use strong verbs. Cut 90% of your adverbs and adjectives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I don't think your flowery writing and repeating of the same ten descriptors for a penis or ass should've carried you this far.

Freddog6601Freddog6601over 1 year ago

A possibly good story buried in a nonstop sex scene.

What’s with the continuous description of Tyler’s tool.

This series is in dire need of an editor.

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