All Comments on 'Live to Ride Ch. 04'

First i will only leave anonymous comments because i am not nor do I intend to be a registered user. Second, I am very impressed by the plot development. the characters have much more depth than i anticipated. (i am the one who made fun of you for referring to your cut and snub nose every paragraph in the first chapter.)

Oh and the sex is hot. knowing the people makes it extra hot. So thank you for writing. not nearly as annoying as i anticipated. Actually very enjoyable and i look forward to more.

Hope you keep these coming for a litle while

I like these type of stories and yes while i'm not in the culture I do understand the workings of it.

As a fan of SOA, I have to say, I like everything so far. I too have written a story with the Motorcycle culture in it, but have yet to finish it, like a few others.

I like your style and though don't consider myself an editor in any way, did notice a few small things. Not critiquing you, just saying I saw them. Otherwise its coming along nicely.

The description of the Club House truly reminded me of the SOA Club House and I connected more with the story. Having grown up around the Military and been in(Army), I connected even more. It molds itself into the lives of what so many riders and patch wearers could literally be in and yet the fantasy of this is not lost.

Its almost like a SOA story line with the added eroticism. I'm totally into it! Keep up the writing, let your imagination just run wild. I liked the answer to the Candice problem, didn't see that one coming! I'm definitely a fan of this story!

i hope you are going to continue the series it is a great story so far

Please leave us a note about when you will complete this story. Thank you for writing.