All Comments on 'Living Arrangements Ch. 01'

by RedRavenBaltimore

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AnomandarisAnomandarisover 11 years ago
Good start...

Although it would have been nice for you to finish the prerequisites. I hope you continue this story.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
A really good start!

And a marvellous introduction to Literotica, too. I really enjoyed this opening chapter and I look forward to reading much more soon. Thank you for writing for us - five stars.

ReefkeeperReefkeeperover 11 years ago
I never

Since the chapter was in the way of an intro, I looked for the "other stories in this series" section, there were none. I started to get annoyed but then saw today's date. I can't ever remember reading a story on the day of submission before. I want Chapter 2 please!

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 11 years ago
Oh yeah Hon!

She's from Homewood and he's from Highlandtown. Naw that wouldn't work, no Homewood family would allow their little girl to work at Taco Bell.

Excellent story, great beginning, very interesting plot, I'm hooked! You go Smaltimore!

tonguelasher01tonguelasher01over 11 years ago
Nice beginning

A make or break provision might be to require her to accept his right to offer her use in all holes and every way to anyone he chooses to share her with.

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