by RealDoc
Hope to see the following chapters soon. The anonymous critics wont read this story so the comments you receive will be helpful to you.
Good Story, close to real life for those who have learned the best way to pick your friends is with your eyes shut and your ears and heart open!
I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story.
First rate writing; if no grounding in real experience of yours, then you are an exceptionally imaginative and creative writer. When you drew the setting, in time and geography, I could see the end of (or beginning if you're driving north) the Apalachians up Gadsden way in Alabama. I thought of my binlaw's experience as a young M.D., in Neshoba County, Ms., in the Sixties and how he was threatened. Well, a fine beginning and hopefully you will share more of this story with us.
True love and respect have no color codes -
Good people are good because they are - not because of what they are -
Nice story with a good ending -
No Chap2 needed
I actually liked this story. It was somewhat touching, I suppose, or maybe it was just a bit uplifting. Regardless, well done.