All Comments on 'Living Our Fantasies Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

It's "FORESKIN", not "four-skin", and "THROUGH", not "THRU." "Chasin" - no such word = Chasing. If you want to use words with a dropped "g" at the end, they need an apostrophe replacing the "g".

LIVINRFANTASIESLIVINRFANTASIESabout 8 years agoAuthor
FORESKIN"

Thanks.

I realize I got my foreskin skinned back incorrectly.

Thru is just a short cut and in no way am I goin to rewrite common everyday English as is spoken to friends over a beer.

Thanks for the comment and for reading the story.

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