All Comments on 'Living The Dream Ch. 01'

Good buildup to what we know is coming..

Lot of potential, eager to read more

Very well done. I'm hooked. Looking forward to more.

A very good read, I am looking forward to the next chapter

New writers probably shouldn't start with long cuckold stories.

I try to read new writers stories with an open mind. Sadly this one didn't hold my interest. I gave it a 2 for trying.

I think you'll find there are fewer who like cuck stories than those who like them.

didnt read it

giving it five stars anyway becuase FINALLY a cuck author used the goddamned tags

So far, so good, It's a bit predictable, but I do like the age difference between Connor and Lara. It adds to the story's suspense and makes her ultimate decision more difficult. To start seeing a man, her own age or someone who is significantly older? The age dynamic adds to the concept that the possible relationship with Connor is solely for sex and it's fueling Peter's developing fantasy to see her with another man.

Well done, and more ASAP, please.

Regards,

Mr. B

A story about a wife being sexually corrupted and taken from her husband is inherently depressing, no matter what revenge (if any) the husband might take. Personally, I would be happier if you stuck with the fantasy theme and had her play with her husband's mind.

Had to skip from page 1 to page 6 just to see if there was some sort of plot or point to this story. Still couldn't tell. The husband thinking its great that other men want to fuck his wife is always a warning sign: Cuckville next stop. Enjoy the ride, without me.

I loved the build up and how his young hot wife would get wettter the more she spoke about being dirty for the neighbor. I would've loved to be the young husband. I love your work. I can't wait for more to come. Thanks.

Great story, I can't wait for part 2!

Love it. Interested to see what "dark" themes we may see.

Cool story. You write well. Don't worry about negative comments. Regards

Good start! I like the writers who inspire you (Donsilver above all) even the story seems more similar to AvidReaderNovicewriter ...I hope to read new chapters soon, thank you

Honestly, one of the best I’ve read in a while

great start, looking forward to the next part of the story. Do you have any dates?

Great start. Ignore the negatives. Let’s get started on husband’s new status!

Thanks for the story. You'll have to ignore the loud minority. They're like Hamas supporters, they'll come in and crap all over your story despite this being Loving Wives and you have the right tags. They (like 26thNC) will come in very fast too, like they have some sort of addiction and cannot separate reality from fantasy. Wives who cheat and husband taking revenge isn't "loving wives" and definitely isn't erotic at all (hint at this site's name).

Love the story and the buildup. Looking forward to part 2

Very promising story, with lots of build up, hope the corruption will take slow pace. Can't wait to read the next chapters. Thank you

I am convinced that if you had been influenced by other authors, it would have been something. So I can only assume it's getting worse with every chapter!

A very promising begining, i hope you continue the same way. The lengthy chapter gives an good insight to the relationship and the love scenes are well made. I enjoyed the girl being athletic, having done martial arts and throwing punches, it feels good seeing a female hero that is strong and proud but may eventually fall from grace. Don't rush and make her immediately submissive, you need to show a bit her a4c. Also, the old guys at the park... you left that door open, happy to see where it goes. 5*

Absolutely fantastic. Great narrative pace and character development. The erotic scenarios were subtle but explosive.CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2.I'LL BE CHECKING YOUR PROFILE EVERYDAY.GREAT WORK,WELL DONE.

Great first effort! I like the authors note you put at the very beginning. It’s nice to know at glance what the story is about. Your writing style is great too. I knew on page 1 that this was 5-star writing, and that opinion held throughout. I hope you continue.

Great story. Can hardly wait for part two.

Great first chapter. Love how Lara is retelling the events as fantasy and Peter can’t be sure if she’s telling the truth. Bring on the next chapter!

I hope Connor has a 18-20 year old grandson to seduce Lara. It's still an exciting story. 5***** Looking forward to more.

I'm in for the next round. Lara needs to keep that bum neighbor in check tho, he gets demanding again she needs to pop him again and then play in the garden. I think the older bench gentleman should get a better crack at her while looking for those special flowers.

I read what you wrote in your biography about your wish to perhaps attempt a re-write of chapter 1.I think it's natural for any writer to want to change,improve and evolve their work,but let me assure you,chapter 1 reads beautifully. Sometimes a direct,uncomplicated narrative drive can be extremely effective. You have absolutely nailed it.I'm not sure if you're aware of the term 'Gaslighting',but I would love to see that avenue explored in upcoming chapters. Fabulous start.

I think for a first this is an incredible story.. Please go on..You are great. When I was 16 my brother had just married and I saw them making love she was very voluptuous..Some weeks later I heard her screaming and went to my hiding place n saw she was getting fucked by my older uncle with his huge thick long cock while my brother sat watching..His abusing her was making brother harder .. I went to sleep after relieving myself suddenly I felt someone on my bed.. my sis in law came n grabbed my thin small cock n kissed me on my mouth I could smell semen of my uncle on her n she said you are like your brother.. keep your wife well supplied by huge cocks,, your uncle will definitely seduce her n I will help him as your mother helped him to get my innocence..

Amazing story. Instantly followed and looking forward to Chapter 2 :D. Keep up the good work!

HOT STORY!!!! Go on soon ;)

A lovely promising story from a great new talent.