All Comments on 'Living Up to the Legacey'

Beautifully, gently done. Thank you

Wow. I love your writing style. I loved the story and the happy ending, and yes you were very successful I was blubbering at the end. 5 stars. Love Chloe.

That was so lovely. 🙂 trying not to get tears on my keyboard. Never stop writing I love your story's. Thank you

Please do write another chapter as there is not too many loving transition stories on this site!

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

Ever since I can remember, I wanted to be a girl, to wear their lovely clothes and shoes, and to forget that I was ever a sad and lonely little boy. It didn't quite work out like that, but I DID become a Transvestite, and now hugely enjoy dressing exactly as I please, whenever I please. It's a compromise, and it is just enough...

...but how I wish I could have been just like Erica. My eyes are moist too!!

That was simply perfect. So sweet and tender and loving. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Ok! I cried too. Loved it.

yup... tears rolling down my cheek as I type this. Thanks, as always, Shelby for taking me to such good places.

'nessa

Beautiful....just beautiful. Thank you for such an uplifting story. To have someone fully embrace who and what they are with their loved ones being there with open arms and smiles is just wonderful. If only all who go on this journey could have this scenario.

brilliant quality writing and yes the tissues were needed!

Wonderful romantic story.....makes me rethink avoiding ciswomen lol

As always a beautiful story. My eyes did water at the end :) Although it felt a bit rushed at times. I wouldn't mind if it was a bit stretched out, showing some more details about Erica's transition, maybe a few shenanigans and a bit of trouble along the way :) Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more of your stories.

Several tissues later and I finished the story....simply lovely!

OMG what a tear jerker, loved it

Such a fantastic story, excellent writing

Wow what a great story. Please continue this it has such promise

Awesome story. You did a great job. So much heart. So much love. So much happiness. Thank you.

Absolutely beautifully stunning work Shelby. Another one of yours added to my favorites list. Thank you so much for your magnificent contributions. Please continue.

Oh my GOD. You were SO right. I cried the happiest tears I've shed in a long time. Thank you. My own mother would NEVER be like that. She does not like me as Kira whatsoever. But, that is who I am inside

Wonderful wonderful story. Thank you for writing it.

Shelby, you did it again. Yes, you got to me too... How many Victory tissue box icons do you have stenciled on your computer by now?

This is a movie waiting to be made. It tugs on the heart strings beautifully.

A beautiful and heart touching story. I'd go on but just know it's beautiful ❤️

Damn, I have never had a story make me cry like this. Most of the time I feel very little so thanks for letting me know I still feel.

Ne plus ultra!! Spectacular read.

“You were always the strong one, you know that?" Waterworks, right there. My face was soaked by the end of the page. I will never, ever disregard a tissue warning from this Author again! What a beautiful, beautiful journey.

Such a beautiful, well-written story. I appreciate stories where someone finds their true self in such a loving way.

Amazing story. Great read

Great story! I believe that fraternal twins can be of different sexes.

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would love to read more of this story.

I like this, and I am a straight male. A good story about accepting oneself as different, discovering who you are, and being accepted by others. The mistaken worries about how other people might re-act is a salutary warning. We all need to accept that gender stereotypes are just that, and be whoever we feel we are. This story expresses that very well.

Oh my God, such a beautiful expansive story. I loved it. When this is turned into a movie, the locations will bring it way over budget... I love the ending, perfect...

please part 2 good story

You always pull me into your stories!! Excellent!! Personally I’d rather seen Erica with Hailey but it’s your story to tell. Like to see a picture of you instead of the cartoon.

Simply beautiful !

You are one hell of a writer. Very few if any writers have brought me to tears. Its like a damn monsoon here. That was really beautiful. Thank you. I keep trying to log in but .........

Loved it

Toni Tempts

Once again...absolutely beautiful! You have an amazing voice and an amazing talent. I wish you would write some novel-length fiction. Transgender themed Harlequin Romance novels. I would be your biggest fan!

Thank you. Very well done, a splendid story. J.A.C.

Love love loved it. Thank you.

This is a reply to Anon preferring to see a pic of you rather than the cute avatar you use:

I see where you are coming from but have to disagree.

Aren't we all caricatures of who we really are, hidden in the deepest spaces of our psyches? I know I am. God forbid I try coming out as the woman buried under this façade of who my outer appearance represents when I am anything but that person!

XXX

What a truly wonderful story. Sex stories aren’t supposed to make me tear up, but this one sure did. Another one to add to may favorites. Thank you for the amazing story.

I've never commented on this site before. I just have to say how much I love your stories. Once I read the first one I had to binge through them all. Many of them were such a fun read, while others were almost spiritual in helping me through some things with my own transition. I hope your stories continue to help others as they've helped me. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Utterly beautiful, so sweet to follow Erica's transition into the beautiful young woman she always was.

Absolutely beautiful story! I love your writing and now need to read all the other stories! Not that I didn't have enough to do, lol! Thank you!

I thought I was ready. You warned me. I'll read more of your stories when I stop crying. Thank you for this.

You are an amazing writer. This brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.

You're an amazing writer and the way you develop the characters in a way that makes them relatable and not just a trope is soon rare! This was an amazing story btw!!!

You got me good with this one... if you aren't receiving commissions from some tissue company, you're both missing out on money. ;D I am such an easy and willing target for your Romance stories.

Now I need a new box of tissues.

I hope you're satisfied. XD <3

Made me cry at the last chapter. So nice neh

I cried at the end too,

You write to my heart. I'm 51. I transitioned a little over a year ago, and I am voraciously reading everything I can of yours. Thank you for writing this. If you ever write a novel, I pray I find it.

Well, your the only woman that has ever had this guy use so many boxes of tissues...thank you

Beautiful, well written. Thank you. Peace.....

Ok this one broke me. The ending broke the dam and the waterworks flowed free. What a ride!! Rarely do you find a story of this magnitude on a porn site. Such depth of character development and story flow. Just a beautiful trip from start to finish!!! Leaving you with a huge lump in your throat and happy tears! Thank you for this escape from daily life!

Well written. One of the best I have read on this site. Would love to see a continuation of this story.

This has to be the best story, I've read on here, EVER!!!

Your AWESOME!!!!!

Very nicely done. I will definitely read more stories from you. So many stories have odd gaps or other issues that distract me, but your story just flowed. Definitely a fan already!

That was just the loveliest story!!! I just hope Erica and Hank remain together!!! Just truly lovely!!!!

What a terrific story. Thanks so much and I would love to see a sequel 😊

Wow, I didn't think I would tear up but I sure did.

Your stories are absolutely wonderful. Excellent job, and I hope to read more from you.

If you ever publish your collection of shorts, I'll be in line.

This is my favorite story on Literotica. I identified so hard with Erica and her journey, even though I haven’t even started mine.

The military angle, the exploration, and the return to who she really was were magical!!

Please coni the to write stories like this!! I was so overjoyed!!! And it made me happy and gave me a bit of euphoria seeing Erica’s transformation.

I loved the mother’s letter and. Or writing the whole thing, but just the closing made it even better!!!

Absolutely love it!!!

Sincerely,

Samantha

Excellent! 5 *

I could probably cry. I can't seem to. I know exactly why and I wonder if I'll ever have the balls to do it. For now. Thank you for placing this Erica sized mirror in front of me. That was so enjoyable and adorable. All I felt was euphoria the entire story.

ur the best vanilla endings writer ever I always enjoy your stories

Sh*t. I just read this story for the third time and still I teared up in a few places. Especially at the end. Now I have to sit at work with red, puffy eyes 😋 To be honest I'm rereading all of your stories and so far this is the best one. But I know there are more gems down the list. Hope you keep on writing such beautiful stories.

Nice one Shelby. Please add some additional chapters to this one, it deserves it and so do the characters.

I loved "Teachers Challenge" and this ones up there too for enjoyment. Made me tear up a few times, you naughty girl. As punishment go and write me some more stories. ❤️

Love this story every time I reread it! Always causes a few tears but its always so worth it!!! Still would love a new chapter...

You weren't lying when you said that we should prepare to cry.. I did and for 2hrs straight after the story ended. So beautiful, such a wonderful story of love and acceptance. I love your works so much. I am still on my journey through your catalog, reading them alphabetically. Please keep writing, you are amazing! <3

I have no words other than, well done, very well done. I loved it.

well done. finally someone writes a story where the father wasn't an a__hole.