All Comments on 'Living with Lauren Ch. 01'

Great beginning, the rest of this story should be quite interesting. I can't wait to read what happens next.

but one or two more paragraphs would have left it with fingertips hanging from the cliff's edge. Look forward to the next chapter

Very good for the first chapter. Please write more parts to this story as I loved reading it so far. Please make the remaining parts a bit longer.

Thanks for the kind words, folks. I just submitted chap. 2 to be reviewed by the webmaster.