All Comments on 'Liz's Bad Day at Work'

Nice story - looks as if it it will have more than one chapter as well. Looking forward to the continuation.

Excellent job! More!

...of what looks as if it will be a major new story - thank you - 5 *s.

Not a bad story but really could use editing.

there really should be a part 2 to this

I have been a long time reader and this one is your best story to date. I particularly like the workplace setting and I am eagerly looking forward to the futre follow up/s to this. Keep up the good work.

this is a great start to what will hopefully be a new storyline. please don't keep us waiting to long for a new installment. I know from reading many of you other stories that it will only get better.

Based on The Apprentice?

More please !!

ripe for a sequel?