All Comments on 'Lizzie and Sappho Fucked Senseless'

I found your opening paragraphs concerning the ‘us and them’ mentality that still seems rife in the LGBT community interesting. I’ve noted that it’s not enough to simply agree with, and vote for, equality issues. Unless one is actively campaigning one is still treated as the enemy, or at the least as an outsider. Other minority groups eg. racial seem to take a similar stance. I’ve a sneaking suspicion it actually impedes what they are trying to achieve. End of social comment.

Regarding the story itself, I don’t have a lot to say. Good (four star), which is the least I expect from you, but not great. Possibly didn’t have a uniqueness aspect that I need to see before allocating the fifth star, though the various sexual connotations were cleverly combined. I don’t often comment on technical writing issues, but there seemed to be a major continuity error concerning handcuffs at Para. 31. I’ll leave that to you to check.

My most interesting commentator, by far. I agree this story is not among my best. Literotica rejected it twice and I removed more and more material. Or perhaps the conception is rather conventional. I will check on the writing issue that you mentioned. Thanks for the comment and the stars!