All Comments on 'Llara's Life'

First of all I'd like to say that the story was very well written, both the erotica and in general.

I would love to see another chapter where Aaron (the original) gets his body back and puts Llara through a fucking of eternity that'll make her want to commit suicide. I just felt so bad for Aaron getting screwed over by someone he basically liked for a long time just because he was kind at some point and questioned the world.

Really disliked Llara for her manipulative nature and really hope she gets whats coming to her soon.

Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to another one soon!

Please :D

It seems odd to me that she wouldn't just jump.

good writing, the story really sucked me in, I even started actually expecting him to jump, since the situation is truly hopeless, but you chose to keep him alive, which suggests there might be hope of some comeuppance for the duplicitous bitch?

This story was a great read but it left me wanting to see him get his revenge somehow, maybe find a resistance in the wild's and find happiness leaving his body to suffer when he is unable to pay up.

An impressive story, a depressing dystopian future and the emotional journey of Aaron was quite believable, bookended as it was by her contemplating suicide. One hopes she escapes to the wild to discover a very different life, could easily see a resistance story coming out of it.

I love this as she try’s to come to terms with who she is now and the wrong that was done to her but if she had any Inna Strength she would have bitten of his cock the first time he put it in her mouth no matter how horny she was and she isn’t a coward because she’s thinking about jumping if she was at that point she would have walked up to the roof and jumped not think I think she is growing some inna strength what that will result in she may well cut his cock off but not his balls so he can still get urg but can’t fulfill the need and every guy knows how painful blue balls can be the he will be bitch agin as then the others will fuck him witch will be Justus and I think Lara will do better in the wilds than even she thinks