by VirtualScott
You've even made me laugh. I'm enjoying this very much as I go along reading, even though I already know where you're going with it. I like the clean manner of switching time frames with interspersing chapters, and I love the fact you are actually an excellent author, taking the time and thought to develop the characters and the plot into finely honed virtual existences. I normally don't comment midway through a series but hold off until finishing the conclusion, however, I feel I may have much more pride in your achievement to express by then and felt I should indulge your patience with a little flattery and relieve my bursting desire to commend you. Thank you for a great story, the best I've read under the mind control genre.