All Comments on 'Lloyd's Angel Ch. 08'

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kemanderkemanderalmost 10 years ago
Excellent Writing

You've even made me laugh. I'm enjoying this very much as I go along reading, even though I already know where you're going with it. I like the clean manner of switching time frames with interspersing chapters, and I love the fact you are actually an excellent author, taking the time and thought to develop the characters and the plot into finely honed virtual existences. I normally don't comment midway through a series but hold off until finishing the conclusion, however, I feel I may have much more pride in your achievement to express by then and felt I should indulge your patience with a little flattery and relieve my bursting desire to commend you. Thank you for a great story, the best I've read under the mind control genre.

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Back again after having been locked out of my account for six (!) years! I'm interested in all kinds of kinks, but particularly psychological issues: How do you react if you're forced to do (or want) something you wouldn't do normally? What happens if you're in a position to ...

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