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Looking at it, as Eric moved his phone into place, to capture the image of the first time she let a man insert his penis into her mouth, she was mesmerized by how big and weirdly muscular his cock looked up close. She could see the bulging structure of the shaft and the slight flare of the head as it tapered to a rounded tip. Her eyes looked up to Eric as she tried to find the momentum to close her eyes and take him into her mouth. Like someone who has climbed to the top of the high dive for the first time and looks down into the water that now looks much further away than it seemed like it would, when they'd looked at the structure from the ground.
"And if I don't do it?", she looked up at Eric who had his dick positioned an inch or so from her lips.
"Then you'd forfeit and Ellie would be queen of Spring Break," Eric cautioned her.
Ellie put her hands on Eric's hips, lowered her eyes and nodded, before slowly rising to her feet and facing Ellie. "You win," she said softly.
Ellie gave a loud whoop and raised her fist in triumph before she started dancing around to the music that continued to blare from the boombox. Eric reached behind the bar to produce a chrome plastic tiara that Cassie had found in a box of old toys in the garage.
"Ladies and gentlemen," Eric announced. "Let's hear it for Ellie, the queen of Spring Break 2020." They all clapped and cheered, even Ellie.
"Due to a forfeit on Cali's part, she will have to pay a more severe penalty than a simple loss." He handed Cassie the penalty shot which she quickly downed. "As a penalty for forfeiting a tiebreaker, Cassie will also have to submit to receiving ten lashes from the winner and the Queen has the option to make the loser take them on her bare behind," he paused, "as well as the right to deliver them with her hand, rather than the paddle."
Ellie burst out giggling when Eric delivered the proclamation. She jumped up and down clapping and then teasingly put a single finger to her lips as she decided Cassie's fate.
"I think I'll deliver the spanking to her bare bottom," Ellie decreed regally, "with my bare hands."
Ellie nodded in defeat and stepped over to the bar where she placed her hands on the edge and extended her body back to offer her behind to Ellie. Ellie stepped over and delicately lowered Cassie's bikini bottoms until her ass cheeks were bared. Ellie possessively rested her small hand for a moment on the smooth skin of Cassie's pale, bare ass, before pulling back it back and delivering the first slap. Ellie winced as she felt the sting of Cassie's hand and hung her head behind her hair to conceal the way she bit her lower lip in pleasure.
After so much drinking, Cassie wasn't bothered by any pain from the spanking. Instead she was wishing she could see herself like Eric did at the moment, bent over with her ass exposed, her younger sister spanking her and allowing her bare hand to rest on the flushed pink cheeks of her ass between delivering each slap. While a part of her wanted Eric to spank her instead, she knew deep down that submitting to Ellie like this was much more humiliating after the rivalry they'd shared growing up. The fact that Eric had engineered this moment, and was watching her being degraded like this, was so delicious that she almost wished she had submitted to taking his dick in her mouth when she had the chance. Except that she wouldn't have been able to experience the shame of this moment if she had.
When it was over, Cassie pulled her bottoms up over her pink ass cheeks and turned to Ellie to hug her and congratulate her on her victory. Ellie clung to Cassie and whispered in her ear, "Thank you for doing this...and letting me win. I hope I didn't spank you too hard."
"No, it was just perfect, El. I'm glad you got to have fun on Spring Break." Cassie whispered back into her sister's ear.
"I'm having so much fun, Cass..." she laughed. "I mean 'Cali'." She pulled back to look her sister in the eyes. "Don't get me wrong. I love my sister to death..." she declared before leaning in to put her mouth right up against Cassie's ear, whispering "But she'd never suck my tits like that!"
Ellie pulled back and covered her mouth in mock-surprise for a moment, before they both burst out laughing and began dancing their asses off to the pulsing techno remix coming from the boom box.
- COMMENTS
OldUncleAlover 1 year agoIve. read this far quietly, but I have to comment. WHAT is it with Cassie that. Everything involves her being humiliated? She is at home with siblings not facing the Spanish Inquisition! And the comments aboutt don't hurt her? I repeat she is at home with a brother and siister who all love and care for each otheer.
I need a new iPad every time I touch it it double letters or something. This is we'll have to wait till I straighten it out.
thedayafterover 3 years agoI want to echo the sentiments below. This series has been so good so far it would be a real shame to spoil the loving relationship between the three siblings. I've no idea where you are taking this story or how you plan the future of the siblings.
I hope that their relationship develops into a permanent loving relationship for all three of them. The inclusion of anyone else would be just wrong. You've mentioned a Lisa a couple of times with the hint that she likes Eric. Please don't spoil the siblings relationship by including her or by ending their relationship when their parents return.
So many authors do not know how to handle writing a long term relationship for siblings and often include a third party or end it with the siblings going off to different colleges etc.
So far you haven't written that the siblings feel anything for each other other than familial love. I'm hoping that changes as the story develops and both Cassie and Ellie wake up to the fact that they are in love with Eric and Eric realises he is in love with both of them.
I think most of the people following this story want a happy ending, an ending where they all remain in a loving relationship and remain together.
Hot_Potatoover 3 years agoxxxanilkumar had a great comment below. He is correct... and I will only add do please keep Cassie safe. Show that both Eric and Ellie love her very much.
xxxanilkumarover 3 years ago(as always, pardon for my English, also I don't know how successful I was in explaining my own thoughts. This is a bit long comment)
One of the very rare and my favourite story series among the entire erotica I've ever read. Literally no words to describe the quality of your story. I always loved the slow stories and yours one of the best for me.
I admire slowly building incest relationship stories between brother and sister, and only between older sister and younger brother. Because for me the normal 'power' or 'control' for big men over women is so normal and I never felt any interest in the such kinda relationship. Also I think the relation with older sister seems more and more intense than the other because the awkwardness or nervousness happening to them over their younger brothers is more adorable than the other. And you portrayed it very well, that too with two charming big girls.
Almost everything I wanted to say have already been said by others, though I've a very few suggestions for your story. The first and main thing is the sibling relationship between them especially to their brother should NEVER EVER be spoilt, please. Almost all the incest stories I read just ruin this 'sacred' relationship later and they just turn into a normal couple. They are siblings, NOT normal couples, they always forget this primary thing. Hence what, the story would become a normal one, just the places or time changes and only that. They just F**K after that and they just continue F*****G, nothing more. Why? Because they 'forget' that they're siblings, so naturally nothing to do other than just f*****g. That's why I said they should NEVER turn to normal couple; the awkwardness, embarrassment, discomfort, shyness, nervousness,.. should be there even after doing 'everything' because they're just and primarily the siblings, they can behave or live like couple but this shouldn't be forgotten. So please please never ruin this 'precious' relationship. I'm not that sure, the relationship between Ellie and Eric now feels like it's heading towards that.
They're siblings, even after seeing and trying everything, they don't need to walk naked always, but can be sometimes. They could do stuffs, even love making at kitchen while washing dishes, while studying, or at some tension building instances like at the presence of parents or other people without knowing them,... or they could atleast touch or fondle at their presence. Or sometimes Eric can make them orgasm while at dinner table in the presence of parents or others.
While reading the beginning of the first chapter when I came to know that there're two sisters I was about to stop reading. But when I realise that they're both older than him (most times one will be older and other will be younger), and they both don't have any 'interest' in him at first, I thought that I'd keep reading atleast the first chapter. Later my interest easily lifted when I noticed that both have too distinct kinda 'attraction' towards Eric. That also is very rare thing. Both can have romance with Eric and Eric can love both of them, but in different way like in your existing story.
Also, if possible please delay the real 'love making' between the oldest sis Cassie and Eric as much as possible, even showing the 'rest' of her that hasn't seen by him. I'd love if there's multiple tries, multiple fails, she becoming too self-concious before love making, stopping/leaving/quitting while love making, abandoning him,.. or anything that makes her uneasy towards him, but at the same time without having the heart to leave him completely. Also the real Cassie shouldn't leave her because that's the reason why she's still keeping distance with Eric. Everything I said above only be more adorable if she stays as Cassie and not Cali. Also please don't make Eric too dominant over Cassie.. (I think I'm in love with Cassie ;).
I've even more to write, but better stop now. Please take my words as just a reader's suggestions and not anything like an advice. You're the author and, you and only you've the rights to write your own content, please go forward.
Thank you for taking time to read this long text, have a great year ahead.
