All Comments on 'Locked Together'

Loved the story. Very different from what I'm used to reading and I absolutely loved it. Hopefully there's more.

This story seemed familiar and I realized you're the same author! Wondering what happened to Mike and Alina and if this is connected to that one.

I really liked this! I thought the concept was very creative, and I liked that they were initially both reluctant. It only made it sweeter when they both gave in to their desire.

This was a well written and very interesting start to what I hope is a multi part series, it seems to be part of a world this author has invented. the story flows very smoothly and has interesting dialog, I would put this authors capability to write well and smoothly on par with many others in here, I especially like the lack of course language that way too many think enhances a story but in reality just cheapens the story telling. This is on par with 3 of my other favorites, IE three days of watching my wife fuck by Newbie2008 , Chinese Christmas by GoldenCojones and Sophia by CastleStone to name just a few. Please expand and continue.

Interesting and exciting story, but it is obviously meant to have a second chapter. Looking at the author's other works and reading the descriptions it looks like a somewhat similar story was started earlier than this one, but has a third chapter that was posted AFTER this one was.

I hope this chapter is going to be continued. Not sure if I want to read the other entries until I'm sure this one is done.

Even so, incomplete as it is, I voted five stars, good story.

Hot. I need to rub one out now.

One of my favorite stories. it's well written, and i love the inevitability of it. Still hoping for a sequel. I know there are others in the universe, but this one seems to be hanging there.

I want to be put in that position by something and with someone who I would least expect just reading that story made me hard really quick