All Comments on 'Locked Up Ch. 02: Locked behind'

Please disregard the snarky urologist there. Ejaculation from prostate massage is not the same as an orgasm. I thought this was hot as hell and I'm only assuming that the ring has some urethra blocking mechanism built into it ;-) Eager to read more of this story, so please please do keep it up!

While I always appreciate constructive criticism, I get the feeling the previous anon may have missed the point of this chapter. This story has a way to go yet, and I would like a chance to course correct if I'm losing people already. Without giving any real spoilers, there is a reason it's in this category and for the tags I picked.

I would like to ask, for those who have made it this far... Are you picking up what I'm putting down here? Or have I missed the mark?

Thanks all,

- Prof. Owen.

Good story, good writing. Don't listen to the peeps that insist on actual facts in a fictional piece. If they don't like it they can click out of it.

Just keep on writing. This story is as hot as hell. Five stars for sure. And the writing is top-notch (thanks).

Thank you all for the kind words and encouragement. I have been writing a long time, but never posted publicly before. I know my kinks are not for everyone, but I am so glad people are enjoying. Gwen and Dave will be back soon, and new challenges are on the horizon for poor Davey!

-Prof Owen.

Great story cant wait for next bit

Really enjoying Dave's descent into slut-dom. Can't wait for the next installment.

LIKED THE STORY, BUT...

The premise is not correct. Male ejaculate (semen...or "cum") is almost entirely produced outside, or beyond the scrotum. Hence, the ring in the story, tight around Dave's balls, would not curtail his orgasms or release of semen. Nor would his scrotum accumulate an appreciable amount of fluid...just millions of little sperms.

That said, I enjoyed Locked Up, and look forward to Ch. 3. Fantasy doesn't have to be accurate. Keep writing and submitting. (I know it's sometimes a chore, having recently completed a 33 chapter Literotica story.)

FICTION WINS OVER REALITY

Anatomically, Submisky35 is correct. But I say, to hell with reality. This story is GREAT! Keep it coming. (Except for Dave. No cummies for him. Hehe!)

But it all happens too fast. It's as if there's a rush to have the chapter over.

Doesn't rate neraly as high as Chapter 1.

Gave it 3 stars.

Nice sequel. I'll take it as a fantasy story as some stuff wouldn't work in reality (as some people already mentioned). So fantasy for me and I can totally enjoy it. Thanks for this story.