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Click hereIt seemed like something had come over Gwen, and she started fucking me harder and harder, both of us breathing hard, moaning and gasping. I could feel her hips smack against my ass with every thrust, the weight on my balls forcing them to swing as she pounded into me. I knew she was talking dirty to me, calling me naughty names, but my focus was on the spot in my boicunt, and the pleasure, and pressure that was building there, building and building, my insides heating up. It felt so different than a normal orgasm that I did not realize what was happening until Gwen slammed inside me one final time, twisting her hips in such a way that I was forced to cum. Or at least, I tried to. That damn metal ring was doing its job, and if I thought coming was bad when I was in Gwen's ass, it was ten times worse with her in mine. My ass clenched on her cock, my balls throbbed and pulsed, and I swear I felt them grow bigger as all that pent-up cum crashed against the metal ring and had nowhere to go. I cried out in a mix of pleasure and pain and collapsed on the bed. Gwen rode me down, keeping her fat cock deep in my hole. She snuggled against me as I lay there, trying to reach back to feel my balls, which I was sure were going to pop at any moment.
"Oh wow, Dave, I never meant for it to go so far so fast, but you just looked so sexy like that. If I did not know better, I would have said it sounded like you were coming, right at the end, but the man at the store said most guys can't come just from anal, which is why I knew it would be easier on you." I just groaned, wanting to explain that the guy at the store was an idiot, but I was too exhausted to speak. "I'm so proud of you for taking it all like that. I knew I pushed a little hard, but it's all for the best, I promise. Maria is not going to believe it when she sees it."
Nice sequel. I'll take it as a fantasy story as some stuff wouldn't work in reality (as some people already mentioned). So fantasy for me and I can totally enjoy it. Thanks for this story.
But it all happens too fast. It's as if there's a rush to have the chapter over.
Doesn't rate neraly as high as Chapter 1.
Gave it 3 stars.
FICTION WINS OVER REALITY
Anatomically, Submisky35 is correct. But I say, to hell with reality. This story is GREAT! Keep it coming. (Except for Dave. No cummies for him. Hehe!)
LIKED THE STORY, BUT...
The premise is not correct. Male ejaculate (semen...or "cum") is almost entirely produced outside, or beyond the scrotum. Hence, the ring in the story, tight around Dave's balls, would not curtail his orgasms or release of semen. Nor would his scrotum accumulate an appreciable amount of fluid...just millions of little sperms.
That said, I enjoyed Locked Up, and look forward to Ch. 3. Fantasy doesn't have to be accurate. Keep writing and submitting. (I know it's sometimes a chore, having recently completed a 33 chapter Literotica story.)
Really enjoying Dave's descent into slut-dom. Can't wait for the next installment.
Thank you all for the kind words and encouragement. I have been writing a long time, but never posted publicly before. I know my kinks are not for everyone, but I am so glad people are enjoying. Gwen and Dave will be back soon, and new challenges are on the horizon for poor Davey!
-Prof Owen.
Just keep on writing. This story is as hot as hell. Five stars for sure. And the writing is top-notch (thanks).
Good story, good writing. Don't listen to the peeps that insist on actual facts in a fictional piece. If they don't like it they can click out of it.
While I always appreciate constructive criticism, I get the feeling the previous anon may have missed the point of this chapter. This story has a way to go yet, and I would like a chance to course correct if I'm losing people already. Without giving any real spoilers, there is a reason it's in this category and for the tags I picked.
I would like to ask, for those who have made it this far... Are you picking up what I'm putting down here? Or have I missed the mark?
Thanks all,
- Prof. Owen.
Please disregard the snarky urologist there. Ejaculation from prostate massage is not the same as an orgasm. I thought this was hot as hell and I'm only assuming that the ring has some urethra blocking mechanism built into it ;-) Eager to read more of this story, so please please do keep it up!