All Comments on 'LOCKtober Ch. 02'

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LustyScribeLustyScribeover 3 years ago
Oh, you cruel, kind Mistress!

Kind to give Daddy such amazing relief and pleasure...cruel to make US wait so long between chapters! LOL Keep it up, you're doing great!

MentalPatienceMentalPatienceover 3 years ago
Anticipating more

There's a lot to love about these stories and their kinky twists and turns. <3

wantago9wantago9over 3 years ago
oh mine mine

Oh mine goodness you have got me so exciting. Way to go Amy! Love how you explained every step of the way. Oh shoot I wish you have forgotten to put up the cage while going down stairs for ice. So that, Daddy can wank himself and was wondering what he would do with the sperms before you come back up with the ice. LOL oh boy you wrote great way to hit me and got me hard on all the way. Naked Hugs xoxo

big_hardt_4ubig_hardt_4uover 3 years ago
Converted

Hi Amy - I will confess that I started to read chapter 1 and used my aversion to chastity devices to convince myself that not everything you write will appeal to me.

After sleeping on it, I reconsidered and have just finished the first two chapters and once again you have me hooked! As always, I love your character development: the focus on describing both actions and feelings. The trust and love between these two characters is evident. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and talent with us.

sargethepupsargethepupover 3 years ago
More

Oh Amy, I wanna be held and made to earn such a wonderful release! Please continue this story

chasteboy1966chasteboy1966almost 3 years ago

Anymore parts of Locktober?

This is hot

pleasureclickspleasureclicksover 2 years ago

chastity devices and withheld orgasms are not something I particular seek in a story, but here, it was an interesting transition of role reversal, from submissive daughter to submissive Father... that said, I loved the usage of the condom, and her Daddy's reaction, felt like it was the first time he had tasted his own seed... 5/5

northirishdivernorthirishdiverover 2 years ago

Enjoying the story any more parts Amy?

Bbcluver59Bbcluver59over 2 years ago

Wow, Amy! What a lucky girl you are. And, what a very lucky daddy you have. Letting him enjoy his first gulping down of his own orgasm….only to be followed by using his tongue on you. Another wonderful story. Well written, girl!

Rob5545210Rob5545210over 1 year ago
Hope you return

Hope you return to finish the story.

I have read most of your stories and love your writing style.

Look forward to seeing more from you.

Take care,

Rob

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I hope you come back with David and Celeste story. They deserve their own series. I don't know, maybe their adventures in meeting various incestuous partners.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It's bullshit without pussy fucking

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