All Comments on 'Lodger's Delight'

Loved the story line and characters. Wonderful work!

If so your english is impeccable. However the term "Nether Lips" refers to the Vaginal Lips not the lips in your mouth. I doubt that Sebastian would have had any of those accessories!

Anyway good story gave it a 4*

This is a great piece of writing. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very sensual.

Mellifluous Maria --- Great story!! You are a talented writer, with even greater potential. I know whereof I speak because I am a widowed professor teaching Creative Writing, Literature, Poetry, Film, and Communications at various colleges and universities here in the St. Louis area. I used to be Handsome, Sophisticated, Suave, Debonair, and Witty. Now, alas, I am only the last four:( :( intend to read the rest of your stories. If you are interested in discussing your writing in more detail, write me at gavican2003@att.net. A surreptitious squeeze of what I'm sure is a tantalizing tush (lol). Prof. Gav

Great story, well written and rounded. The sex was really hot. I wish I could write half as well as you.