by ronde
A space sex odyssey, I want a go with Vrkelli, having your cock massaged like that, nice
Cheers, Andy
Nuts, bonkers, whatever you want to call it but I love it. Wuhl is going to be driven mad by the girls and their needs and I wonder who else he's going to meet and rescue?
It was an interestinng device you used at the beginning of this 2nd yarn. Short sentences, (Almost a stream-of-conciousness technique) Rushing the reader headlong into this interspacial frolic.
All before the logicsl mind said "This is impossible!". Most enjoyable. Very successful. Again 5 stars simply isn't enough for your inventive mind.
Small squelch. Page 1, para 7. The word is "Screeched", not "screached". S' o.k. I forgive you.
Very interesting stream of consciousness writing. I'm not entirely sure that what you taking is legal but it is resulting in a very fine story. 5*
Peapod41 you are doing it again, criticising when you are yourself equally guilty. Your spelling of "interestinng" is interesting. Detention is inevitable.