All Comments on 'Lois Learns Submission'

....would love more detail.

You have the confidence to bare all. ... good on you.

this story was way too long and too much was going on. i lost interest really quickly

Short but awesome story.... story could've developed slower with more detail in her humiliating progress. Her humiliating situations and embarrassment were gripping. Story had potential to go much longer.... i think due to its shortness you involved her boss and it seemed too rushed and not logical... it could've been held over her head to not let her boss and coworkers find out... a risk she took everytime she danced onstage... please don't stop these kind of stories...