All Comments on 'Lola and the Demon Ch. 02'

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BobbyZeusBobbyZeusabout 9 years agoAuthor
Typos and editing

I am aware that there were some typo's and editing problems in this part of the story. In my haste to publish the second chapter I did not take the care I should have. I will do better going forward. I am hard at work polishing the first part of the epic story that will be "The Demon's Disciple". Thank you all for reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Was a wonderful tale.

I love this so much period I hope in the next story anal is involved.

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