All Comments on 'London, 2020'

by HoneySkin

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yowseryowseralmost 4 years ago

Sweet tale

Lovely lead-up descriptions that capture some of the oddness of the times. 'Curtain twitchers' all we are indeed. Raw, immediate, emotionally invested.

HoneySkinHoneySkinalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you

The positive feedback is very much appreciated - it's great to have some encouragement as a first-time writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Loved it

Loved your writing and the eroticism. More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Last line

oh I do hope the last line is true.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Well done! The story’s eroticism drew me in, but it was your description of life whilst in quarantine that made the story real.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

the husband played no part in this, it could have just as easily been a single mom. There was no reason to make this a cheating wife story,

Which unfortunately ruined it for me, sorry.

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