All Comments on 'Lone Wolf Ch. 01'

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CandycoatedbombsCandycoatedbombsalmost 8 years ago

This story is adorable. Love it so far. Looking forward to watching these characters blossom. Great job.

baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 8 years ago
Great start!

Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good story

Hope to read more soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Did they just become mates? Adorable story, keep going

canndcanndalmost 8 years ago

Are they born wolves? Was he turned? He seems to know much less about being a wolf than Oliver. Is there something to him being so attracted to his smell? I don't think they r mates bc I don't think Oliver would been so willing to back off. Is his family all human and is that why the parents didn't talk to him? There is alot I'd

like to know about them. Also what was the reason the pack agreed to him being a lone wolf so close? As Oliver said, an artist isn't much use to a pack but a lawyer would be. Look forward to more.

nanobotnanobotalmost 8 years ago
grrrreat!

Such a lovely tease. Charming and dangerous. More please.

jese7726jese7726almost 8 years ago
Good start

I'm interested in how the story will open. Character history, back story on pack and family. Please continue.

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIalmost 8 years ago
This is good. 5*****

I can't wait to see how this relationship will build and if the pack will make trouble for them. I am wondering if Oliver is really who he says he is. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More more more

Please make more this story is serious talent build a fanbase do something because if I had the money I would fund this art please make more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More

More please

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