All Comments on 'Lonely Babe Took My Virginity'

Keep trying.

Stan

I found this very exciting! I thought the charahters seemed real--and beleivable. The sex was well described, I could feel what was happening!

Great job keep it up!

How well you write, The close to dread feeling that the girl might withdraw... the fear of his own lack of knowledge, her act of changing him from boy to man.

Even from many years down the track those memories remain so clear of my first time

The time will come when your daughter will grow and you will find plenty of time to write. Then look out world here she comes........Terry Australia

Good solid writing, enjoyable read. Way to go, Ms. Black. I've just spent the last 1/2 hour perusing your stories and I've been immensely entertained. Thanks for your time and talent.

...Not being a ball-less cuck, I'd have told that bitch to fuck off until she could talk to me with a bit of respect.