by Fyrwink
Nice, hot and erotic. Just too damned short! You merely touched the tip of the sexual iceberg.
that was awesome i loved it, i wish there were more stories like that!!!!!, fantastic story, please you have to write more
This was a good first effort. You did a good job setting the tone and making it hot. It'd be nice if it were a little longer. Also a little bit of motivation for the sex, what made the girl immediately eat the other's ass?