by Fyrwink
This was a good first effort. You did a good job setting the tone and making it hot. It'd be nice if it were a little longer. Also a little bit of motivation for the sex, what made the girl immediately eat the other's ass?
that was awesome i loved it, i wish there were more stories like that!!!!!, fantastic story, please you have to write more
Nice, hot and erotic. Just too damned short! You merely touched the tip of the sexual iceberg.