by kclovin
I don’t know what to think about it…
First part is a great one, with a lot of details, and the heat reach the top all along the text which is really really good… But after that the second part leads right to the sex without any details this time…
Quite disappointed but still good basics !
Great tale forcing recollections of college life.
Did get a bit lost while you inserted details that I felt should have been earlier in the tale.
Your intense sexual iterations display a lot about you, ALL OF IT GOOD.
So much better than your second story.