All Comments on 'Long Blonde Hair, Sky Blue Eyes Pt. 12'

Just another in your long line of interesting tales, your final chapter may be all over the place as you stated at the end of this posting. I am certain that somehow you will gather the pieces and publish another awesome read for our consumption.

This one was well worth a much better rating than the Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating I gave it. The political and international intrigue just adds to the tale.

Thanks for continuing to publish products for our consumption. You have an interesting creative mind.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

"a bit all over the place" describes this story better than all the positive and negative commentary combined, and I admit I laughed when I read it.

I have gotten lost over and over again in reading it, and am loving it. The typos are annoying because a couple of times they affect my confusion. Ah, but...

Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.

THANKS

Racing along, cannot get the final instalment soon enough. For such a great story I can forgive any typos and for it being " a bit all over the place".

I mentioned it a few chapters back, I’m afraid there are so many plot lines at this point, it’ll be near impossible to satisfactorily pull them together in a meaningful way. Not going to stop me from reading it front to back, just an observation. 4.6*

Great chapter as usual, can't wait for the final one!

Plot twist: Annika has been working for the Kremlin and this whole story turns to crap.

But….. hopefully not since it is very entertaining

An editor that can tighten things up would be very helpful. Long Unnecessary descriptions Bog things down

5*****

I've been thoroughly enjoying it. Any update on the next chapter?

Kinda Chaotic so very many rabbit trails about AI variants which confuse without really contributing to advancing the story line. In short a real mess. The whole thing has gotten so torturous with so many skeins that I really cannot determine the wheat from the chaff. call me unnecessarily confused…

3 stars