All Comments on 'Long Evening'

Not my cup tea cuckolding !

Tornado Tys - if it's not your cup of tea, why read it?

Good story, any truth in it?

Badly in need of proof reading.

Even after I considered that statement for awhile I just can't picture it. Way too little information in this mess. Cardboard characters acting without rhyme or reason. Sentence structure and word usage was a disaster. I don't think even a great editor could have saved this garbage. Just plain awful.

If you're a retard.

1* Go away

But much too short. Could have used some background material on how their relationship developed.

If you get chopsticks from a chinese buffet they are often one piece of wood that you separate. If you don't separate them you can ease apart the sticks and they will clamp at a right angle to the nipple like a solid wooden clothespin goes on a line. .

Would like to hear more of the story from her perspective.

after the first paragraph and gave it a 1*.

Eventually, it (mostly) comes out, but this story is like a jig-saw puzzle for a long while. Good authors can withhold some information to suddenly expose a great twist at the end, but no such luck in this tale! Maybe more like a morass, since a jig-saw has a plan.

The Bull is usually an important player in an LW story, whether the tale is cuck or not. What do we know about Bull in this tale? Introduced Sweetie to BDSM from early on (maybe reinforced if you take Sweetie's text of 'tied up...' literally or not (I didn't, but mox nix!) A 'tall guy' from the spotting in the bar! We can, from later that evening, suspect that Bull is blessed with great endurance (unless Sweetie is playing mind games with Hubby!) In other words, almost nothing!

2.6, just barely making 3*

Even tho the setting isn't made out to be in England, we know from the title it is at least written by a Brit.

1*

Help me, Anonymous - Don't try to fool us.

"Even tho the setting isn't made out to be in England, we know from the title it is at least written by a Brit"

I am no good at geography so remind me where London is.

As a stud who fucks other men's wives for them, I find it odd that his hot slut wife only does BDSM with him. I and any other stud I know, after fucking and stretching a wife's hot wet pussy, will want to add a couple of close friends to the fun. Her lover does not want cuckold there, tie cuckold up naked and watch as the stud uses his wife and how she loves it? Also if cuckold is in chastity, he will be much more focused on his missing needs. Just some thoughts. Also if cuckold is tied up, he can be used to clean the lovers cock after lover has fucked and unloaded in the wife.

have you ever tried to turn a man into a cuckold only to have him rebel? i bet you havent since your still alive you asswad

Nothing else but the *2.

ROFL. Serious I did laugh, which I appreciate, this was one of those days that twasn't all that great.