All Comments on 'Long Family Road Trip'

I hope there is much more to cum on this story. I enjoyed it what a lucky bloke Ed is fucking his female side of the family. I like to give 5 stars but I hope he has kysta again, so more chapters please.

This story seems so familiar :eyeroll:

MORE PLEASE

I stopped reading as I got in to page 1.

Physically impossible with the very little room there was inside the car.

The theory and story behind it was sound but actions were impossible.

Sorry didnt like it

This boy is a machine gun. I lost how many times he comes. Maybe 100?

Ha ha ha

Not that it wasn't good, just an overdone theme.

3⭐

FUCKING MORE PLEASE!!!

THAT WAS VERY ENJOYABLE. WANT MORE!

Bzzzz. WRONG!!

Enjoyable, but got too improbable. Yelling, and nobody noticed! Jumping around in a car is very noticeable.

Mary got to sit in the front passenger seat twice.

Funny words used when talking.

Got to be a followup on this...

- of people who completly lack a sense of smell ....

Story needs to be cleaned up a bit. Read it before posting or get an editor.

Hey listen, your story was written just as good as most of the stories posted on this site. I liked that there was only one male and his cock over 8in. It’s ridiculous how some writers say the guy has a huge cock and its just 7in. Your story was also more descriptive of the sex scene. Ive read some stories that just say the boy pushes his cock in the woman cums then pulls out. Don’t let the critics tear you down, keep writing and posting.

I had Sex with My Cousin in the Station Wagon ... My Cousin is happily Married now days as am I .. And No I did not tell Anyone .. I had only had Sex with 1 girl before that Trip .. Keep up on the Series as I am enjoying it ..

This a great start to a great long story!

My wife has been fucking her nephew for 2 years. Her brothers son comes by anytime he

this should be continued with them arriving at his aunts house, please continue the story

another piece of shit you wrote, I read a couple you posted and they are all shit, so unreal, one star, you should stop posting your shit, it a waste of time for the readers, I won't be reading any more of your shitty stories.

Continue please. Keeping it in the family.

Please continue your work author and don't listen to the critics hope we see more of you next year too.

Damn it was amazing. I hope that you will continue this story author.

Charlie MORE

...i wonder - they must sit in lap - because they lack space...

Yet, they can do acrobatic positions like standing 69, on knees to blow dick..

dont get me wrong, sweet story - but i was just thinking about space...

This story needs more chapters,

Great incest porn! Fast and hard!

Awesome story 👍👍👍. Need more of this, please continue.

Great story. When is part 2?

Next chapter?

Really ridiculous everyone shouting while in a car. And, no one hears anything. Story itself is pretty good, and I will be looking for next part.

more of this story please

All the nicd fucking, but I don't likee mother catching cousins - at the beginning Mary was able to see her sister's face in the mirror only of she leaned to the window, and later on could observe the entire action.

Waiting for part 2

Ok - the next chapter - about the additional fun you have teased about.

Total BS!

This kid must be a monster. No normal human can fuck for 8 hours and cum so many times. And how come each woman after her 2 hours of fucking is over, never suspects that the next in line is getting fucked too. Very erotic no doubt, but all your lead males seem to have extraordinary libido. But one correction: the past tense of ride is rode, not road.