All Comments on 'Long Flight: Territorial Challenge'

I really loved this entire series, and this last part really surprised me. The pack-master is defeated? I wouldn't have seen that coming. If I didn't comment before, I enjoy how the world's are melded; the mall is a hunting ground, ravines, forest, etc. Although his actions were rather uncivilized, that seems like logical behavior for an animal--he seems more animal than man. So I can't hate him, he does what's in his nature. But he lost! Maybe there will be more? the Packmaster's Revenge? =) Looking forward to your next story.