All Comments on 'Long Hot Summer Night'

Very good build up. Very good ending, with your juices mixing with hers, obviously no condom was used.

Teasingly erotic and realistic. I would have liked more action, (haha) but who wouldn't? Maybe that's part of the eroticism...

nice descriptive story ... the author is just as descriptive about himself as his partner lol

well done ... tessie

I thought the story was really great! I really got into it and enjoyed reading it very much. The one thing that might need some revising would be the characters themselves...i feel as though the reader doesn't really know them all that well. Perhaps if you describe them a bit more so that we begin to know and relate to them. Other than that i love it! Good Job!

wow nice nice story!! great imagery too sweets...very hot ;)