by HeyAll
Very well done. An excellent twist on the "sitting on the lap" story style. I would definitely be interested in a sequel.
Wow! Incredibly erotic from my perspective. What’s even hotter is that even the voyeurs get into the act. Doesn’t always happen in HeyAll’s stories. Loved it!
Hot! Five stars. What will happen next? The family dynamic has changed. Oh, the possibilities!
Really enjoyed this tale, would like to see a follow-up. There is more than adequate opening for a continuation. Even if you opt not to expand, great work!
I appreciated that the stimulus to the story only needed minimal definition in order for you to get to the conflict and the resolution. Your efficiency in allowing your reader to get to the meat of the conflict, with all the emotional energy you put into the various perspectives, and the wonderful incompleteness of the understanding of each character, made the story quite memorable. I loved that you didn't give exposition to what each character was thinking. You let their dialogue and actions inform your reader. Nice craft.
And yet another great submission. Excellent lead up with a slow profound ending. 5*
Great story like always. Don't stop there. You have to continue with some more of the same!!
You have a warped twisted mind, I love it. Your writing really sucks me into your stories, How anyone can write 280+ stories is beyond me. They do not disappoint either, each as good as the last. I would have trouble writing one. Great writing again. 5*
Love the way you build-up the story and character no matter how big or small the story is. As always your stories are one of the best
Excellent! Sure hope there's more cumming. I'm thinking some more of Sylvia's take too.
Five stars.
Well, hopefully, you will finish the story when they are all home and let us know the real end if mother enjoyed it just so so much I know the other 3 did. Bloody good storytelling.
Up to your normal standard Thank you
Lovedcthis story also. I like the way you write. I'm hoping you will add more chapters. The whole family needs to get involved. 5 stars
Even better the second time around, dude!!!! The best Incest/Tabo submission with surprises left and right. Fucking shame I can’t rate it again
Great. Well thought out and developed. Looking for more chapters in this story. 5 Stars.
Great! I hope you don't make the green dust a reason for this though. Sexier if she just normally wanted it.
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all family yes mother son daughter brother daughter mother aunt nephew really enjoying themselves, more more more.
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