All Comments on 'Long Ride Mom's Pussy'

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HeyAllHeyAllover 2 years agoAuthor

As always, thank you for reading. All the best.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

As always another awesome story

IJS0904IJS0904over 2 years ago

Very well done. An excellent twist on the "sitting on the lap" story style. I would definitely be interested in a sequel.

CriosCriosover 2 years ago

Wow! Incredibly erotic from my perspective. What’s even hotter is that even the voyeurs get into the act. Doesn’t always happen in HeyAll’s stories. Loved it!

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 2 years ago

Hot! Five stars. What will happen next? The family dynamic has changed. Oh, the possibilities!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of the best stories I've read in a while

fire37fire37over 2 years ago

Continue this please.

Bullrider14Bullrider14over 2 years ago

Awesome story. Chapter 2???

rem556rem556over 2 years ago
Good job!

Really enjoyed this tale, would like to see a follow-up. There is more than adequate opening for a continuation. Even if you opt not to expand, great work!

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 2 years ago

Great twist on an awesome theme. We’ll done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Need more parts please.

Love your stories.

5 stars as al a always

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That's really hot! Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I thought this was the cat's pajamas!

5 STARS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it...would love to see the next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I appreciated that the stimulus to the story only needed minimal definition in order for you to get to the conflict and the resolution. Your efficiency in allowing your reader to get to the meat of the conflict, with all the emotional energy you put into the various perspectives, and the wonderful incompleteness of the understanding of each character, made the story quite memorable. I loved that you didn't give exposition to what each character was thinking. You let their dialogue and actions inform your reader. Nice craft.

Lee2012Lee2012over 2 years ago

And yet another great submission. Excellent lead up with a slow profound ending. 5*

sdboatersdboaterover 2 years ago

There has to be a part two.. great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Wow

Great story like always. Don't stop there. You have to continue with some more of the same!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You have a warped twisted mind, I love it. Your writing really sucks me into your stories, How anyone can write 280+ stories is beyond me. They do not disappoint either, each as good as the last. I would have trouble writing one. Great writing again. 5*

Temptation_9211Temptation_9211over 2 years ago

Love the way you build-up the story and character no matter how big or small the story is. As always your stories are one of the best

MG40MG40over 2 years ago

Any chance this continues?

Soshameless11Soshameless11over 2 years ago

Oh, this needs a sequel for sure!

Crusader235Crusader235over 2 years ago

Excellent! Sure hope there's more cumming. I'm thinking some more of Sylvia's take too.

Five stars.

namidaboshinamidaboshiover 2 years ago

This desperately needs a continuation. Wow!

morbiusrgmorbiusrgover 2 years ago

Excellent storytelling. Will there be a chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More, please! Oh my gosh, that was really hot!

mammoetmammoetover 2 years ago

A chapter 2 would be Nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i mean you can't just leave it with a sort-of cliffhanger like that!

Kiwi4everKiwi4everover 2 years ago

Well, hopefully, you will finish the story when they are all home and let us know the real end if mother enjoyed it just so so much I know the other 3 did. Bloody good storytelling.

Up to your normal standard Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really good story, needs part 2.

5 stars!

sniffpantiessniffpantiesover 2 years ago

Five stars!!! Ended too abruptly….. could go on for more…

Toby1001Toby1001over 2 years ago

Lovedcthis story also. I like the way you write. I'm hoping you will add more chapters. The whole family needs to get involved. 5 stars

BBC2stretchuBBC2stretchuover 2 years ago

This needs to continue!

KMB2476KMB2476over 2 years ago

Outstanding story. Hope there's more planned!

Lee2012Lee2012over 1 year ago

Even better the second time around, dude!!!! The best Incest/Tabo submission with surprises left and right. Fucking shame I can’t rate it again

LaphroaigLaphroaigover 1 year ago

Would like to read more of this tale please

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyed it. Different. Don't wait forever to do more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well written, hopefully there will be many more.

KittyLover80KittyLover809 months ago

Great. Well thought out and developed. Looking for more chapters in this story. 5 Stars.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story please continueit

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great! I hope you don't make the green dust a reason for this though. Sexier if she just normally wanted it.

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stonecoldcowboystonecoldcowboy3 months ago

Awesome as always! Wish I’d been in that van!

AnonymousAnonymous13 days ago

all family yes mother son daughter brother daughter mother aunt nephew really enjoying themselves, more more more.

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