All Comments on 'Longing for the Leash'

Was an average story. The one issue I have is at the beginning of the store when Mistress tells him to take off his shoes and coat and follow Her. A little later in the story she wants to have him wear a dog tail for Her. That's all well in good except for the fact that no where in the story does it say She ordered him to get naked first. Did you infer that the reader would assume he was naked when She inserted the tail. This is just a minor complaint.

Theres room for improvement but it was enjoyable. The emotion was really good.