by yankeedog
Keep em comin man ....... can't wait to see what laura gets herself into next
i really like the plot you've got going. I'm anxious to hear how Laura satifies her needs and what's really going on with John. also how is "Laura's" wife doing in the midst of all of this? Is she a man or is she having an affair with John or was this really her wish and not his?
readers want to know!
Loved the story... was rated real high, then I couldn't find it anymore. Looks as though someone wanted you off the top. It's a shame when people vote just to knock a good story off the top. You got my vote. Sorry for the looser who knocked you down.
Awsome story! Loved reading it! Hope you'll be making additions soon!!!
I like the story but needs more sex and Laura and her sister smoking cigarettes.
I would like you to continue this great story. I would also like you to add more scenes of laura smoking her cigarettes, especially while masturbating or while having sex. Definetly a great story and has great potential to go much further. Very erotic, especially with laura and jane smoking cigarettes.