All Comments on 'Look at that Ass! Ch. 03'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
The story seemed to be rushed

We know that he was fucking his niece,but what led to that encounter? Why was his wife out in the bars giving blow jobs to cowboys? It didn't seem that he knew she was cheating on him,and when he found out, there wasn't much said about it.I think that if you were to write another chapter to fill in all of the blanks would be nice. It's a good start, but just not enough information to make a great story. thanks....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
If the wife was at the door,

SHIT is going to fly, hard & fast & there is no telling where it will land & on WHO!

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