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hellenberghellenbergabout 4 years agoAuthor
Acknowledgements

I would like to note my debt to a certain storyline from the game "The Poor Whore," from which this story grew. Also, my thanks to DMM, a friend who came up with this story's title. This one was a bit of an experiment, and I hope it turned out alright!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good setting!

I like the layout, the snapshot sex scenes, but as a female, and a cuckquean, I would've liked to hear the male POV or some of his dialogue.

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Many of my stories are inspired by the universe of No Haven, an erotic RPG / slave management sim being developed by BedlamGames. Some stories owe a debt to the inspiration of friends. Most, if not all, will be generally compatible with your generic high fantasy setting. There...