All Comments on 'Lookie Loo'

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Red_Power_borgRed_Power_borgover 17 years ago
great story but rushed

you need to not rush into sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Why

WHY?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Thi was horribly written !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

that was horrible! to short not enough details

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Almost Too Bad To Bother With!

Awful - absolutely awful!

Gaston1Gaston1over 13 years ago
Bad

Bad story. Don't write another till you get much better.

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