All Comments on 'Looking After Lorne'

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Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 4 years ago

It just shows a little compassion can go a long way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I thought this was a very touching story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Love -- real love

This is real love! Lorne has emerged from his shell beautifully, thanks to the narrator's care -- loving care --for him. It is good to see that emergence and Lorne's "growth" or return to normal. Glad to see they are lovers, as it is good for both. Love Lorne

s description -- hairy chest, cock, his willingness to suck the narrator, and how Lorne's cock shoots his cum when the narrator gives him his shower. Please write more!

FortheseForthesealmost 2 years ago

Much too short! This is material for a full length novel. Sometimes it takes a long time to figure out, what is actually missing, when you are married to a woman. Recognizing your old school mate always was more then just a friend can destroy or kill you. Or, in this story rescue heal you.

So, please: rewrite this touching to a novel.

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I write based on experience and fantasy combined, meaning there's at least a little truth in with all the lies in each story. I'm on goodreads.com as D.R.M. Weaver. I am the author of Tattoo: A Journey Through Submission, a novella, Turned Out: From Straight to Bi, Curious: F...