All Comments on 'Looking After Sarah'

Well I really enjoyed reading it, it was very much a love story to me but not the type that over does it. I do hope that he remains to be the babys dad and her lover forever.

I hope Robie is treating you good better than Michael did i think it was wrong the way sally treated him for a Georgia girl turn turn down sex she must have been dead to do that to robie.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

This story can definitely go for a sequel. Like how Sally wants Robbie back and so on. Hope to see it soon. Great Job btw!

I truely enjoied this. Very well writen. Hope there is a next chapter in this story. You thought out everything. I really do like a story that doesn't go right in for the sex. Its nice to find another writer that writes the way you do. Keep it up.

Baribrother

An older, experienced woman is what every young man needs, but an age differnce of about six years is perfect. Sarah and Rob are contemporaries, but she is experienced enough to be able to teach him about sex and how to please a woman. She is the perfect woman for him.

Nookiehunter

I liked this one a lot. Did you know there are states where a nephew and aunt can get married? (Not many, but...)

I suspect you are English, or maybe Canadian, as there seem to be a few Anglicisms sneaking in here, despite the U.S. setting.

Loved the story and understand the moral. Well written, carry on.

They made love--it was very sexy. Now she has to be late to deliver the baby and the doctor needs to tell her that fucking will make her go into labor. You can entitle the story "The Fucking of Labor" :)

THE MOST ENJOYABLE SEX I EVER HAD WAS WITH MY WIFE WHEN SHE WAS PREGNANT, AND YOU HAVE HELPED BRING BACK THE MEMORIES IN THIS WELL WRITTEN PIECE, VERY GOOD

Im from Masachusetts like the character in your story. I have never celebrated Boxing Day? Great story otherwise.

Write a Sequel to COver Rob Knocking Sarah up himself or something after the divorce

nice story, too long for it's content.

I loved reading this story. Too bad you haven't written anything since this story. I sequel to this story would be nice.

I would like to see a continuence of this. I would like to see a bit more of how the rest of the family will react and how Rob and Sarah's relationship grows

Just finished your with your story. When i first came across it, my reaction was, what the hell... this is going to be long and boring, But as i keep reading, i thought to my self, Wow, this guy? girl? knows how to write. I don't know if you write these kind of story because you only know how to do so, but i believe you can do a book of some short? i know for me, i like reading these kind because they are not boring subject, its sex! who dose not like sex?

Keep u[ the good work, i hope to run across another story of yours one day!

-MrtoesTERman

It was one of the few that the sex was secondary to the story. I suspect you are from the UK as you used some words that are not as common in the US as they are over there. Not that location matters but the story was set in the US. I hope you continue to write as you seem to have a gift for it.

For something so 'old' this story is really good. I know you've improved since writing this, as you've not stopped. Therefore you can only have gotten better. I can't wait to read something new.

P.S. I was nice to read about something other than Tanith and Garth lol

MORE!!!!!!! Don't leave us hanging.

I greatly enjoyed your tail please continue it

For clarity's sake it should be led--as in to lead or to be led. It reads much smoother that way regardless of the fact some teachers want it to be lead, lead and lead. By the way, there is no such word as irregardless, the word is regardless. Think about it. The generally accepted term for ejaculation is cum rather than come, which can be confusing. Always go for clarity. If what you have written makes a reader mentally stumble it creates a negative feeling. The story was excellent and the writing mostly good. Keep writing--I gave it a 5.

Liked your story! romance is the spice that makes a story for me .

iv read alot of stories, but this one really caught my attention, the abuse and standing up for women really spoke to me, really look forward to the next chapter

For chap.1 you have done an excellency job. Now you need to follow through with more chapters of their life together . This was a love story for a life time from his birth, and Sara has always been the true love of his life , KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK

You did good, but I think you should have at least another chapter.