All Comments on 'Looking for Miss Right Pt. 02'

Wonderful characters!

5

Terrific story from one of my favorites.

Yes indeed, wonderful characters, well-developed and interesting, too! I do love to read a story where the good guy gets the girl and the bad guy gets what’s coming to him. A rich, opulent lifestyle filled with beautiful women completes the fantasy.

As always, thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work. I appreciate it!

Yes indeed, wonderful characters, well-developed and interesting, too! I do love to read a story where the good guy gets the girl and the bad guy gets what’s coming to him. A rich, opulent lifestyle filled with beautiful women completes the fantasy.

As always, thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work. I appreciate it!

Sir Author you tell great stories and I enjoy the way your write and look forward to your next story Thanks for your time and work.

Thoroughly enjoyed both parts.

Certainly worth all Five Stars!

I had to suspend belief that two people would rush into a lasting relationship with this many alarm bells going off, but otherwise great read. 5*

Oh well, till Chelsea's next drunk party, I guess (with another protagonist)

Great story

Very nice touch with the ending mirroring the beginning. Great way to close, but would have liked a bit more to thier story. Still a good tale though.

WOW!!! Thank you for sharing this outstanding story!

What i liked most is the natural flow of most of the conversations. They were not clinical and forced. There was humour and teasing just like a normal person would have.

JUST ANOTHER MANWHORE AnD HIS MULTIPLE SKANKS WITH MONICA AS HIS RICH OLD BITCH

I have rea several of your stories and enjoyed them all. They are more realistic than most of the Literotica stuff. Also, unlike many of the other writers you are not obsessed with short women. Now if you could just rid of your obsession with 'puckers' . . .