All Comments on 'Looking Glass'

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GREAT story and nicely written! Thank you and I hope to see a continuation of this story.

Should be in Sci-Fi & Fantasy, in which case I wouldn't have touched it.

Good start. Definitely warrants a continuation, preferably in multiple parts.

Good characters, she is lovely!. Also nice plot,, actually a promising long story. Congrats and we are looking forward more installments!

Wow, this was a great story. I love, love, love the way that was written. A love story across time ... great job!

I will reclassify, Annoying--er, Anonymous. Sorry to tease you into trying something outside your box.

Superb start to the story series, would have liked more detail ie her thoughts about why she is so sexually demanding prior to the Pill?

Also I suppose I wished we had a longer chapter so more about the tale was revealed.

Thanks, wonderful. Now to read more of your stories.

Don't think it's misclassified. Good story, nice build up to lively and frustrating end. Hope and wish there's more to come.

5⛤

Beautiful! And definitely calls for continuation. I want see these two work at trying to get back together. Would love to see Cora try to process life 2022!

Very creative. Enjoyed the whole thing.

Ok, the mirror as time travel device not so much.

Assume there's more, as her 'death' or whatever hasn't been explained. I feel maybe she went ahead permanently. Look forward to more.

Please do a part two. Amazing story,well written.

Great beginning! I hope you write more chapters soon

Dear Anitole, I hope you're still alive and well as this story surely wasn't over, and I have so enjoyed your other tales! Honestly the best writing I've come across on here. If you're writing somewhere else (even if not erotica) I'd love to know too.

You can find me on Kindle Vella under J.W. Anitole. "ROADRUNNER" is still in progress but I keep whittling away at it.