All Comments on 'Looking In'

too many typos and wrong word usage. I'd suggest using an editor from here or at least have someone else read it over.

Hopefully there are more installments

Very exciting ...cant wait for more

Hey all, thank you for reading. The second part is also published. Do have a read :)

Didn't like the mom - son relationship here but the description is nice.

Great insight to what turn some sons on. Very well written in a special way.