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Another short one.

I don't send these shorts to an editor, they are just random ideas that bounce into my head and I scribble them down and throw them out there.

So Here goes.,..

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Loop

Louise loved shopping.

Having been one of seven kids, to a working-class family, she had grown up poor. Most of her clothing had been hand me downs, and being a middle child, was then handed on.

She never had anything of her own. What few toys she had, were also ones that had been used by her older siblings and would be passed on down the line.

When she found herself finally in a position to shop, and spend money, and buy herself things, she considered that she deserved it as a reward for a childhood of deprivation.

Her husband, Clive, was happy to indulge her. 10 years her senior, he had met her at the software company he owned. She had been employed as a receptionist and he had fallen for her on sight.

When Louise had first met Clive, she had been attracted to him. He was a good-looking guy and kept himself in good shape. He was rich and successful, and he was also a very clever man, leading the drive in fully immersive gaming, a technology for gaming using a headset that interacted directly with the gamers brain, placing them Inside the game world. They would see, hear and feel like they were living the lives of the game characters.

Clive chased Louise, and Louise didn't run very fast.

They married less than six months later, and of course she quit her job.

Louise loved her life. She loved to be the wife of a rich and successful man. She loved the social aspects of the life too. The parties, the coffee mornings, the tennis club, but most of all she loved the shopping.

Then everything came crashing down.

It was a Tuesday.

As usual Clive was up with the lark, took a short run of only about 3 miles, and then showered and breakfasted before going into the office. He would spend most of the day there, working hard for them both. She loved him for that.

Louise rose about two hours later, had a quick bite of breakfast and then got ready to go out. She had a busy day planned. She was going to the HOA meeting this morning, then into town to shop. She had planned lunch with a couple of her friends at the tennis club and then into the spa for pampering afternoon. Clive wouldn't be home before nine so she could watch some television and then prepare supper.

The HOA meeting was fun, she loved hearing all about the small transgressions of the neighbours and judging how they were going to be punished.

Her shopping was a success, she bought herself some new underwear, and she looked forward to modelling it for Clive at the weekend. As she was going past a jeweller, she saw a pair of cufflinks that she knew he would love. She stepped in and took a closer look.

Happy with her purchases she decided to make her way to the tennis club, but as she drove towards the club, she made a snap decision to drop in on Clive and present him with the cufflinks. He would love them and would be really happy to see her.

The receptionist was taking a delivery when Louise arrived, so she just breezed through into the main office. Most of the desks were empty at this time, everyone was at lunch. Louise knew that Clive always ate in his office, so she headed directly there.

Clive's secretary was at lunch so again Louise just went straight into his office.

Clive's secretary wasn't at lunch. She was currently bent over Clive's desk, naked from the waist down. Clive was standing behind her, his trousers round his ankles as he ploughed into her from behind.

Since they had their back to the door neither of them noticed Louise's entrance and the noises of their coupling covered the sound of her entrance.

She heard Clive talking to the secretary as he was pounding into her.

"God, I love your tight little ass, Its much better than that sloppy mess that my dumb cunt of a wife calls her asshole. I have to think of you every time I fuck her just to get it up."

Louise gasped and finally Clive noticed her. He didn't stop, or even slow down. He just smiled at her maliciously as he came, pumping his cum deep into his secretary's ass as his secretary screamed out her own orgasm.

Louise couldn't speak, she couldn't move. She was overwhelmed by a wave of pain as she felt her heart break. The man she loved, whom she thought loved her, had betrayed her and was fucking another woman. He didn't even seem sorry that she had seen them.

She felt sick and dizzy, she needed to sit down. Her breath came in short shallow gasps, the room spun, and she blacked out.

It was a Tuesday.

As usual Clive was up with the lark, took a short run of only about 3 miles...

Clive clicked the mouse, closing the window on the screen. He looked at the readout. Louise had lived through that game loop over 60 times in the last 12 hours. Each time she fainted in game, it reset her memory and began again. He wondered how long she could last before she finally went mad. He guessed that it would take another day, maybe two. He could keep her friends at bay for that long with tales of her being unwell.

He had had to employ someone to care for her physical needs. She had a feeding tube inserted through her nose, and had a catheter inserted. They would wash her and turn her as if she were a patient in an ICU. She would be in perfect health when he finally took her off the gaming rig.

He smiled grimly to himself.

It had taken him a month to program the game loop, all the time trying not to give away the fact that he knew.

He knew about her fucking the pool boy.

The fucking pool boy, what a cliché.

Of course the pool boy wouldn't be fucking any married women for some time. He might be getting fucked by a few married cons, since getting put in prison on drugs offences a week after Clive had spotted them in the pool house, fucking like a pair of teenagers. That hadn't taken long to arrange. Amazing what you can do when you are rich and successful

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oldtwitoldtwit2 months ago

Oh you are devious, nice BTB. Story, short but to the point

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I don’t understand why this is scored so low. It’s a clever idea, and harkens back to Poe in punishing the traitor by the same method as her betrayal.

I love it!!!

ZK

mariverzmariverz5 months ago

AllNigher

preferible por la nariz que por el culo....

digo, ya habia un cateter ahi, no?

MarkT63MarkT636 months ago

Goot revenge...

AllNigherAllNigher7 months ago

Nice idea but this one really needed flashing out. Also, sure has a feeding tube through the nose?

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