All Comments on 'Loosening the Bun'

I really enjoyed how this story built up - keep going!

Aw, soppy, sweet and hot and sexy all at the same time, more please.

I appreciated the fullness of the story, which made it hotter when the sex commenced. Keep the story going.

A true love story, and really nice. I added a little spice by picturing the porn star Nancy A., in the starring role. And I found myself rooting hard for Junie to be a HOT FUCK... which she was!! 5- Stars for a great story!!

My soul needs something like this. Seriously!

The subtle interconnection to another of your stories (a story i want more of, also) did not pass unnoticed. Keep writing, you are doing fine! The link to Chasing Elemistress opens the door to SO many more things, it's gonna be a fun ride in both stories. I can see June making erotic baked goods for Gavin's shop. Ellie and Chase shopping at The Toolboxxx for, oh, let your imagination loose. ALL characters in all these stories have the sense that they will become more open and flexible in their private lives, and that opens so many doors. Do any other of your stories interconnect tangentially like this? Could turn into quite the saga over time, if a bunch of stories get more and more tightly intersecting..

Absolutely lovely! And made me cum by the bucketload.

Please do continue.