All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 08 Ch. 16-20'

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Clancy31015Clancy31015over 4 years ago

For book 9 how about having a few of "Reverend" Morton's church try breaking him out during transfer and members of the Circle end up in a situation similar to Elsa and Cindy's final battle with the Worthington Stalker, but inside the Circle, maybe even have Karen, Julie, and Alice mother finally wakeup as she's approaching a nursing home situation that she was in the wrong and make amends with her daughters while throwing their father, the closed religious organization, and the stalker under the bus.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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