This is better than the previous chapters, and they were all fives. This one is better because Steve made the sex more graphic. In past chapters it was sort of clinical. This is much more arousing. Thanks. *****+
A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...