All Comments on 'Lori and Daddy Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Awesome, keep them cumming

Great story, you have the knack of moving the plot right along without sacrificing detail. Too many authors get caught up in describing the entire situation, you get it balls on accurate! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not worth

... calling it a story. Very poor.

Stan

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Dont be put off...

...by Stan'snegative comment. I loved it. Please keep it going as it is a great storyline.

Chris

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