All Comments on 'Lori and Tom Learn to Swing'

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Hoping for a follow up

well written..well paced,,very erotic,, i liked it

I stoped reading this garbage after the end of the first paragraph! No story, no character development. Right after the first paragraph, without any background, wife suddenly says, without any reason at all, ""Tom, I think we need to open up our sex life."! What gibberish! This is some amateur who knows nothing about sex or relationships.

I thought it was ridiculous that the husband had no idea his wife was submissive. This is something that you can get clued in on very early on in a relationship.

As an author you make the tom cuckhold and lori the lap dog submissive. Why do you put a guys cock much smaller than the Dominate who can do what he wants with other wives. Id say fuck yes give her to him, divorce and move on. Lori is a loser as much as douche bag who has little going for himself than his own idiotic wife shill to get women for Randy .. What a waste of reading.