All Comments on 'Lori Ch. 01'

I really enjoyed the story of Lori and the way you portrayed her....more like a real person with real problems....

I guess I'm just not convinced she deserves to be as angry as she is. They guy didn't trick her, she knew he wanted to be more than friends from the start. They were on the verge of sex before she found out about the money so he could have gotten away with not offerring it and saving himself $6k (and she'd have probably been less snotty to him at the end)

But I do agree with the first comment. I definately feel like Lori is a real person with real problems, which really makes the story.

Thanks for posting.

There is a lot of real life in Lori. But why is she so angry at the end. Is she annoyed at her date, who she knew was interested in her, or herself? I look forward to seeing how this character will develop in future stories.